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Post by Tdyans on Sept 13, 2004 1:24:20 GMT -5
Thank you very, very much! Yeah, originally Sunjat drowned, but there's kind of a "no death" policy ... Not really. You just have to be subtle enough about it.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2004 2:42:05 GMT -5
Anyone reviewing something of mine? *looks* It has been... 8 pages since I requested a review. And I haven't gotten any here so far Please? ^^ Reviews for the series The Princess and the Pauper and my short story A Rainy Day with Rather Odd Visits are demanded greatly appreciated. I'll do some article reviews later on and try to review some requests that hasn't been reviewed already. *happy* Me got lots of positive feedback on my series... ^^
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Post by Sirius on Sept 13, 2004 6:36:30 GMT -5
The Seris Story: Losing EverythingJust like all of the other Seris stories, this was excellent! I found it a bit rushed and towards the end the plot was sort of confusing, but overall it was a very haunting and wonderful short story! I really hope there's at least one more, just to see what happens to Seris. Again, great job! Ooh, thankies. I always seem to rush my short stories... -_- And about the another one...meh...maybe one day...
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Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2004 8:10:42 GMT -5
Anyone reviewing something of mine? *looks* It has been... 8 pages since I requested a review. And I haven't gotten any here so far Please? ^^ Reviews for the series The Princess and the Pauper and my short story A Rainy Day with Rather Odd Visits are demanded greatly appreciated. I'll do some article reviews later on and try to review some requests that hasn't been reviewed already. *happy* Me got lots of positive feedback on my series... ^^ I'll review them after school.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2004 16:29:16 GMT -5
The Princess and the Pauper: Part Two by: shadowcristal Aww, I really, really liked this series. It was cute, witty, and full of charm. Cleverly written with a hint of charm! The ending turned out really nice, I give it two thumbs (or paws) up! ;D A Rainy Day with Rather Odd Visits by: shadowcristal Cute story! It was well written and had some humor in it too. Kind of reminds me of my Neopets sometimes! I liked Aurora's personality towards the end of the story... she's a good character!
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Post by Mary Sue on Sept 13, 2004 16:50:44 GMT -5
As a matter of fact, I think I still have it saved somewhere or other...I'll have to dig around, but I'll PM it to you. Thanks!
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Post by Tdyans at work on Sept 13, 2004 18:38:12 GMT -5
Hey, is it just this computer or is the third part of Nameless Warrior not showing up at all?
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 13, 2004 18:41:46 GMT -5
Hey, is it just this computer or is the third part of Nameless Warrior not showing up at all? It ain't showin' up for me either.
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Post by char on Sept 13, 2004 18:49:14 GMT -5
It's been a while, and no one has reviewed They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing! and Daughter of a Star: Part 2 yet, except for Pen. >_< Please review?
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Post by tennisblondie16 on Sept 13, 2004 19:29:43 GMT -5
The Princess and the PauperAww, this series was so lovely written! I definitely think this was your best piece, Sia, and you did an excellent job on it. The characters' personalities easily showed through, and I didn't find any grammar mistakes (I think). The only thing thing I found wrong with this was the ending, where Ilana and Vannarth go to help find Ilana's home...it seemed to go by really fast. Maybe there could have been some more descriptions or something, I don't know. This wasn't really a huge problem, and I really enjoyed reading this two-part series! Great job--I look forward to reading more from you!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 14, 2004 2:32:50 GMT -5
The Princess and the Pauper: Part Two by: shadowcristal Aww, I really, really liked this series. It was cute, witty, and full of charm. Cleverly written with a hint of charm! The ending turned out really nice, I give it two thumbs (or paws) up! ;D A Rainy Day with Rather Odd Visits by: shadowcristal Cute story! It was well written and had some humor in it too. Kind of reminds me of my Neopets sometimes! I liked Aurora's personality towards the end of the story... she's a good character! Aww... Thank you so much! ^^ As for the Princess and the Pauper, it was originally intended as a short story, but it got a little too long for that. (3500 words?) Considering that romance, kissing and gross stuff (yes, I consider kissing gross) isn't allowed in the NT, the ending was a little bit less un-dramatic rather than what it could've been. Oh... ^^ I had some regrets after sending the Rainy Day story. But hey, I guess it turned out okay after all ^^ I already have a second waiting, but the SF doesn't work for me :S Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 14, 2004 5:00:24 GMT -5
It's been a while, and no one has reviewed They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing! and Daughter of a Star: Part 2 yet, except for Pen. >_< Please review? They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing! by shadih_temporary Whew! Cassandra is eeeevil! Is Mr. Hagen... King Hagan? (Just kidding!) Anyway, I loved the suspense. And Yellow suits Cassandra And it was wickedly funny! But she is a mean little woman. Oh well, all's well ends well. Very nice happy ending
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Post by Deleted on Sept 14, 2004 5:01:55 GMT -5
The Princess and the PauperAww, this series was so lovely written! I definitely think this was your best piece, Sia, and you did an excellent job on it. The characters' personalities easily showed through, and I didn't find any grammar mistakes (I think). The only thing thing I found wrong with this was the ending, where Ilana and Vannarth go to help find Ilana's home...it seemed to go by really fast. Maybe there could have been some more descriptions or something, I don't know. This wasn't really a huge problem, and I really enjoyed reading this two-part series! Great job--I look forward to reading more from you! Well, you see, I was actually writing the story one evening (That is the longest write-marathon that I did.) And it got to like 1 AM. The ending was rushed, but it was originally supposed to be a short story so I snipped it off just a little bit under the limit. Thank you for reviewing! ^^
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Post by char on Sept 14, 2004 6:07:22 GMT -5
They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing! by shadih_temporary Whew! Cassandra is eeeevil! Is Mr. Hagen... King Hagan? (Just kidding!) Anyway, I loved the suspense. And Yellow suits Cassandra And it was wickedly funny! But she is a mean little woman. Oh well, all's well ends well. Very nice happy ending ;D ;D ;D ;D Thanks much, Sia! And, I wrote the story before Brightvale was released. xD
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Post by arti on Sept 14, 2004 12:57:29 GMT -5
Just saying that I am reading the new/continued series, but I just haven't come around reviewing them. Homework stinks.
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