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Post by Lappi on Dec 14, 2002 12:45:02 GMT -5
Okie, there's this comic thingy I write, which never gets in. So umm, would you guys mind taking a lookie and telling me what you think? neo-lapin.tripod.com/comics.html <-- I think that's it... |
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Post by starhamster on Dec 14, 2002 13:29:14 GMT -5
I would definitely avoid the first one if you don't want to get flamed - some people are touchy about that sort of thing. The second comic is a little confusing...
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Post by Lappi on Dec 14, 2002 13:52:27 GMT -5
Yeah... I knew they weren't any good! Umm... I rushed on the second one... and umm... ok, thanks
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Post by Killix on Dec 14, 2002 13:54:26 GMT -5
I like the second one...the first one is confusing in the last two frames...did the Gelert smack himself in the face? is that why there's a paw print on his face? lol
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Post by Linnen Malfoy on Dec 14, 2002 14:14:02 GMT -5
The first one is a bit cute, but I'm not sure if many people would like it... I didn't understand the second one at all.  ; Also, the comics have to be about 460 width wise, so you might want to watch the font size, as when it shrinks the font will probably get harder to read... |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Dec 14, 2002 16:27:18 GMT -5
Yeah I'm totally lost.
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Post by felabba on Dec 15, 2002 10:25:55 GMT -5
I saw the first one earlier, but not the second. The gelert basically got slapped by the kau for commenting on her pants, or in the native lingo, her undies.
The second one I sort of got, up to "Woof" at which point i was confused and slightly weirded out. "So close and yet so far" makes sense, but the situation...perhaps the comment would have been better in a different one.
Babaas...so expensive...but i have a searex! Thankyou starhamster!
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Post by Lappi on Dec 15, 2002 10:36:12 GMT -5
Would it help if I made the pteri say "Yoink" or something like that?
Ok, and I'll also get some actions in the first one. Would "*SMACK!*" help?
And, yeah... the gelert did appear out of nowhere.
Uh huh, you can hardly see the pants... or.. er.. trousers on the kau. =P I'm no good at this. I have another one I really like!! ^^ I've got super rough copies on paper, and I'm just taking the basic plot from it.
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Dec 15, 2002 13:00:11 GMT -5
Yoinks is copyrighted to hanna barbera... aka the people that made scooby doo (YOINKS: Shaggy's way of meeping)
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Post by sara on Dec 15, 2002 16:39:17 GMT -5
So if pants are underwear, and trousers are pants, then trousers are underwear  I know that's not what it really is, but it's not the clearest thing in the world. How did you get the name Neo-Lapin - anything to do with Arsene Lupin or Lupin (or Lupes)? |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2002 17:02:56 GMT -5
good idea, but got very confusing...mabey thats only because i'm english,or just me. icouldnt see the kau's trousers erm pant things.
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Post by Killix on Dec 15, 2002 21:53:23 GMT -5
Yoinks is copyrighted to hanna barbera... aka the people that made scooby doo (YOINKS: Shaggy's way of meeping) she said yoink...not yoinks.... and I know you just said that for information purposes only... |
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Post by spectrum on Dec 15, 2002 23:11:23 GMT -5
I think the idea is good, but you should leave all lower- body-clothing business to the pant devil.
PANTS I SAY!!!!!
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Post by felabba on Dec 15, 2002 23:20:12 GMT -5
I asked Adoribelapin about this before, and i think lapin means the latin name for rabbit.
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Post by spectrum on Dec 15, 2002 23:24:47 GMT -5
Actually, felabba, it's French for rabbit!
Oui oui madame!
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I know that's not what it really is, but it's not the clearest thing in the world.