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Post by Moni on Sept 26, 2018 22:31:25 GMT -5
me: procrastination is bad and people shouldn't do it also me: LOL I'VE BEEN WRITING REVIEWS IN MY HEAD FOR WEEKS NOW and I only have the word "the" for all my reviews me: wow how did i write 500 words of review in 5 minutes why can't i write this fast normally edit: because I am known to be Very Professional Huntress Twillie Thorn June Scarlet Frazealso i forgot to mention that you send all reviews meant to *me* to GLQ because she's amazingly awesome for having agreed to this. :-)
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Post by Moni on Oct 1, 2018 3:17:43 GMT -5
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Post by Thorn on Oct 1, 2018 4:33:21 GMT -5
Thanks for the reminder Moni! :-) Will do.
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Post by Moni on Oct 5, 2018 21:04:20 GMT -5
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Post by Moni on Oct 8, 2018 3:06:11 GMT -5
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Post by Thorn on Oct 8, 2018 5:00:03 GMT -5
WOOOO I just want to thank everyone so much for their very heartfelt critique of my piece. <3 I was in love with the concept but had no idea how to make it Actually Work (my friend who initially reviewed it had similar issues with Not Knowing What Is Actually Going On), but you've given me great advice and I'll definitely spend my next free evening incorporating it into a rework of the story. Thanks so much! =D
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Post by June Scarlet on Oct 8, 2018 14:00:18 GMT -5
Thank you to everyone for reviewing Ink: As Black as Ink, and to Moni for hosting the event. I appreciate it!
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Post by Twillie on Oct 8, 2018 19:53:41 GMT -5
Yes, thank you so much everyone, your critique gave me both some great reassurance and also a number of points about the story that I probably wouldn't have noticed otherwise! I'm loving rereading through all of them and hearing what you all have to say; I feel like this has been very helpful indeed :3
I also really enjoyed reading through all of your stuff! It introduced me to stories I may not have gotten to reading otherwise, and now I feel like it's opened the doors to even more stories that I want to give a try now. Hopefully my feedback has also been of some use to your pieces :3
Thanks Moni for hosting this, and another thank you to everyone for your feedback!
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Post by Moni on Oct 8, 2018 23:30:45 GMT -5
hmmm, thanks everyone for reviewing my thing! :-) very helpful stuff.
also... i'm thinking of doing a critique circle 2 (it would be better than despacito 2) in the future. the main change is that everyone who participates would get a shiny new nickname.
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Post by Huntress on Oct 10, 2018 13:35:34 GMT -5
Broken-recording everyone else's posts, but also many thanks for the reviews ^^ What was particularly helpful was that a lot of the points repeated in all reviews, which made it much easier to see the objective flaws and potential points of improvement. Strength in numbers. And also many thanks to Moni for pulling this whole thing off, organizing stuff is a pain.
I might be down with Round 2: Now With More Despacito (the reading and reviewing really didn't take up much of my time, I just procrastinated it all to heck so the deadline could just as well have been just one week for all the difference that made >>) depending on how my current ongoing NT series will come along.
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