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Post by June Scarlet on Jun 4, 2019 19:29:09 GMT -5
This was the earliest draft, that did have tiny squiggles on it: So I'm not sure if adding squiggles will help. Maybe removing the paper all together?
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Post by Gelquie on Jun 4, 2019 19:33:00 GMT -5
Hm, in this case, I mainly see a tattooed hand now. Though if I stare at it enough, I can see it as squiggles on paper. I still think moving the pencil a bit more to the right will help, in a way that removes the impression of a hand. Or maybe if the paper was fully in view at a different angle?
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Post by Killix on Jun 5, 2019 6:50:05 GMT -5
I think removing the paper and replacing it with a scroll might help. Or as GLQ suggested, put the paper at a different angle. It's the cut-off at the edges of the small image that make up the hand illusion.
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Post by Liou on Jun 6, 2019 16:17:43 GMT -5
Late, but even though I recognise the paper as paper, I'm still very tempted to interpret it as a hand. I think that's because of the way the pen is tilted: exactly at the angle a hand would hold it. If the pen is supposed to be a magical pen holding itself up, perhaps tilting it a little more towards the vertical would help.
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Post by June Scarlet on Jun 18, 2019 21:26:19 GMT -5
M'kay, here's a new draft for critique.
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Post by Celestial on Jun 19, 2019 17:54:37 GMT -5
June Scarlet I like that! It is clearly a pen and a scroll. The colours stand out as well. ^^
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Post by Thorn on Jun 19, 2019 17:56:46 GMT -5
Yeah, looks good to me, too!
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Post by Gelquie on Jun 21, 2019 15:48:28 GMT -5
Happy Solstice. *Brings out the construction gear.*
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Post by Thundy on Jun 21, 2019 15:58:59 GMT -5
inb4 forum blackout
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Post by Ginz ❤ on Jun 21, 2019 16:00:49 GMT -5
Last post before downtime? See you all on the flip side!
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Post by Gelquie on Jun 21, 2019 16:52:01 GMT -5
No members; dance party!
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Post by Celestial on Jun 21, 2019 16:53:15 GMT -5
\o/ Maintenance mode just so the mods can have a party! *knocks over a bunch of threads*
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Post by Gelquie on Jun 21, 2019 16:58:28 GMT -5
Woo! *Sets off sparklers!*
Oh, hang on a moment, I'm gonna move this party downstairs.
EDIT: There we go; may the party resume!
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Post by Twillie on Jun 21, 2019 17:05:51 GMT -5
Mods Members are asleep, posts memes!
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Post by Celestial on Jun 21, 2019 17:14:08 GMT -5
Post memes with swearwords and bad content.
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