[Closed] Looking for Beta Readers for a story series

[CrimsonShroud]

Hi guys,

I've got a new short story series (about 3 parts long) that I have been working on for quite some time now and is all ready for submission.

However, I can't bring myself to submit it yet, since I feel like I should have a second pair of eyes on it. I feel that there are a couple elements in the story that I need some feedback on.

Here's the brief:

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It is called: Facing the Past.  It is set in Neopia Central. My Yurble, Parlebb, opens up to his new adoptive family by sharing details about his past.

If anyone is interested, please feel free to comment and I will send you each part of the story in a PM.

[Zoey]

I offer my services! Going to be a bit busy the next couple of days, but I'll definitely have a review done by Friday. ^.^

[♥ Lulu]

I'd be happy to beta read as well! I enjoyed the last series you put out, so would love to take an early look at this one and help out as I can.

[Moni]

I can probably beta read, too. Just send me a pm if you want. Or don't. It's fine either way.

[CrimsonShroud]

Mar 19, 2016 13:08:44 GMT -5 Zoey said:

I offer my services! Going to be a bit busy the next couple of days, but I'll definitely have a review done by Friday. ^.^

Excellent. Thanks Zoey. I'll send you a PM with all three parts soon. And don't worry, take as much time as you need.

[CrimsonShroud]

Mar 19, 2016 15:49:18 GMT -5 ♥ Lulu said:

I'd be happy to beta read as well! I enjoyed the last series you put out, so would love to take an early look at this one and help out as I can.

Thank you Lulu! I'm glad you had a good read with the last series I published. I will send you the new story through a PM soon.

[CrimsonShroud]

Mar 19, 2016 17:02:16 GMT -5 Moni said:

I can probably beta read, too. Just send me a pm if you want. Or don't. It's fine either way.

Thanks Moni.

Sure thing. And don't worry, it's no problem at all. I'll send you the story through a PM soon.