Any Intrepid Beta-Readers for a Long Comic Arc Script?

[Lizica]

Hey guys!

So, I have this tendency to write textwalls when I'm excited about something and left to my own devices. In this case, it resulted in my writing the next Neopian Anomaly comic arc as a 50-page, 27-part behemoth of an NT comic script that I'm simultaneously giddy, excited, and extremely nervous about.

I would love it if a couple people familiar with Neopets and the NT would care to help by beta-reading it for me and offering some feedback. ^^

Mostly I'd be wondering about:
- How does the story hold up to you? Is it too complicated? Is it too obvious?
- Are all the NT guidelines sufficiently followed? (Action; mentions of danger and death; technology; other?)
- Are there any parts that you didn't like or thought should be removed entirely?
- How do you think would be the best way to submit the finished comics? If you had to break up the arc into multiple smaller arcs, where do you think the most logical (or most fulfilling) intermissions would go?
- Any other problems you spy in here that I can fix before drawing.

Please let me know if you'd like to read it. ^^ I'm not fully comfortable posting the whole thing here in the thread, but I think I could either attach it in the thread for a very short time before taking it back down, or I could paste the script into a PM (which destroys my pretty formatting, but it gets the job done, so whatareyougonnado).

Thank you for all your help, guys! \ o / You all rock.

[Layla "Nimbus" Karimi]

*raises hand*

I really like your comics and would love to help beta-read this arc. It sounds like a wild ride 8D I'm not an expert on comic formatting specifically, but I'm good with story and with NT guidelines, which sound like some of your big concerns, so I should be able to offer some help. Whatever method of showing the script you're most comfortable with would be fine by me ^^

[Deleted]

I'd be down for beta-reading, too! 8D

[Twillie]

I'm able to do it too, if you need

[Caylista]

I can beta-read for you as well, if you need any more readers!

[Lizica]

Thank you so much, Sporty, Nat, Twillie, Caylista! ^__^ I think four is a good number, so I guess the call for beta-readers is closed for now.

I think I'll send the script to each of you in an individual PM, if that works okay. I'm going to fix a couple things first (and flail a bit more first because /readers/ =D;), but I should be sending it soon.

Please feel no need to rush, and just take your time with reading. Again, I really appreciate your volunteering to read it and help out! ^^