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Post by Shrimpy on Sept 4, 2007 14:41:25 GMT -5
Despite my biases on chatspeak, I'm actually gonna miss the chatspeaky Gandalf... *waves 'bye-bye' to Gandalf over the cliff* Seeya! Wouldn't wanna be ya! Well, I'm accualy planning when Gandalf returns in the book and movie as Gandalf the White, in this story he will come back as Gandalf the Speech Corrected Ohhhh... Okai! =D
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Post by nope on Sept 5, 2007 20:46:41 GMT -5
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Post by Shrimpy on Sept 8, 2007 20:35:42 GMT -5
Sooo... How long until we should start lurking 24/7 for part 7? =D
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Post by Rikku on Sept 11, 2007 3:55:09 GMT -5
Sooo... How long until we should start lurking 24/7 for part 7? =D *drags out cans of dr. pepper and sets up station in front of Ringo's computer to get her to write faster*
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2007 15:14:24 GMT -5
*waves bacon in front of Ringo* O RINGO...will you write some MORE please...XD This is hilarous! And I haven't even watched every single movie all the way through! ^^ (Just bits and pieces). Ooh, Ringo, can I be in the story? ^^ Ringo, may I be in the story? XD Good or evil, I really don't care. *thinks* Either pyromaniac fire mage with a bow and arrow (Aly) or a weird girl with a mallet (me). XD
In either case, I DEMAND YOU WRITE MORE!
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Post by nope on Sept 11, 2007 19:21:04 GMT -5
Okay okay. I don't have any time to write now but on friday I will.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2007 19:57:34 GMT -5
Ringo: Sorry. ^^ My way of saying I love the story so far.
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Post by nope on Sept 12, 2007 20:48:21 GMT -5
I really have no time to be on the NTWF at all right now. I get out of school on frieday early, so chapter seven will be done then.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 14, 2007 7:48:40 GMT -5
OOT question: Why did everyone at school call me a cannibal when I said this boy would taste good deep-fried? D=
NOOT:
Who said that? Whoever said that, I compliment them. ^___^ CHATSPEAKERS SHOULD NOT LIVE. ...Or die. >>; Um... Throw them into space? ^___^;;
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Post by nope on Sept 14, 2007 21:20:45 GMT -5
Sorry for the long wait. I've managed to finish Book One (TFLOTR) and I will continue soon to write the next book (TTT)
Chapter Seven (WHOO!)
Few of us pulled ourselves together and we all dragged ourselves into a forest.
Gimli’s eyes grew wide with astonishment as he looked around this brightly lit forest. He hastily looked around and drew closer to Vyt, Squiesh and I.
"Stay close, teenagers!” He cried “They say that a great sorceress lives in these woods, an Elf-witch, of terrible power. All who look upon her, fall under her spell… and are never seen again" Gimli straitened up “But not this dwarf! I have the eyes of a fox and the ears of a hawk... or is it the other way around?” While pondering this he proceeded to walk into a tree.
Immediately, several arrows where pointed at Gimli’s forehead.
“Smooth move dwarf-o.” said an elf who had his arrow pointed at Gimli.
Several other elves had surrounded us and had their arrows to their bows.
“The dwarf breathes so hard, we could of shot him in the dark.” Claimed one of the bigger elves, boasting. He seemed to recognize Legolas (And who wouldn’t? Who walks around with lego?) and started speaking to him in rapid elvish.
The boasting elf and his “troop” lead us to what looked like a great hall of trees. Spiraling up the trunks where staircases, all lit up with shimmering lights. Otherwise it looked like an elf strip-mall.
The elves lead all thirteen of us up one stair case which came to a huge platform.
An elf lady approached us. She shone so bright it burned our eyeses.
She talked with Aragorn and Legolas for five ours and we all settled down to sleep... on the cold hard ground.
“So much of a welcome,” Snorted MGA “Making us sleep on the ground, nice!”
Gimli let out a thundering snore and Tamia hit him on the head with a small boulder.
Hours after everyone had fallen asleep, I lay awake. I couldn’t fall asleep without my iPod. I never will.
The lady elf (Who is Galadriel by the way) glided gracefully past where everyone was sleeping.
“Will you look into the mirror?” She asked in perfectly articulated words.
“No.” I said sarcastically, standing up.
She glided over to a stone basin pouring a silvery liquid that I identified as water into the basin.
I stepped up to it and gasped in surprise.
I saw Shrimpy and Michelle in the basin.
Shrimpy was throwing slushies at an orc which looked like one of those jocks at high schools.
Michelle was using fire magic against the odd orcs too.
Everything went as red as blood and I lurched myself backwards onto the cold hard ground.
Lady Galadriel did not even glance at me.
I stumbled back into bed and fell asleep immediately.
The next day we were roused by the elves. They took us to a small dock in which they gave us some tasty bread, some fancy cloaks and pure white wooden boats.
Legolas held up a piece of the bread “Lambus bread, one small bite is enough to fill the stomach of a grown person.”
Blace turned to me and asked “How many did you eat?”
“Four.” I burped modestly.
We set off in the boats. I was in a boat with Squiesh, Vyt and Aragorn (Who was paddling).
I believe I fell asleep in the boat and nearly sunk it by drooling everywhere.
I woke up when we had docked several hours later.
“Why... Aren’t we... Going... Any farther?” I asked drowsily.
“’Cause we would of sailed down a water fall doofus.” Sniggered Rikku.
“Hey! I’m working my butt off trying to write this story you could at least show me some respect!”
“Oh. Sorry.”
“Thank you.”
Aragorn was Chatting with Gimli when Tamia piped up “Where’s Frodo?”
Everyone stared in bewilderment. Boromir took off into the woods excusing himself by saying “I’ll go look for firewood.”
Most of us sprinted into the woods.
I could hear the sounds of feet thundering, it sounded like several hundred.
I whirled around only to see huge orcs thundering towards me. I was weapon less, my spoon was left at the camp.
The largest orc raised his blade, I knew it was the end and then suddenly Shrimpy and Michelle blasted through the orcs sending them everywhere.
***
Goosh had not left the camp when suddenly Frodo ran out of the forest into one of the boats.
“What are you...? Wha?” Spluttered Goosh, leaping into the boat as it slid off the land.
“GEDDOUT!” Screamed Frodo and many things happened at once, Sam flew out of the forest and floundered into the boat.
“I’m coming to.” He said, wet from head to toe.
*** I watched as Shrimpy and Michelle fearlessly battled the orcs. It came into my head that I was in danger and I hid in a hollowed out tree where, unfortunately, Merry and Pippin where.
An orc had spotted the three of us, squatting like children, and approached us only to get his head lopped off by a Boromir of the rampage.
Boromir had three arrows in his chest.
I screamed for help, but none came. Boromir fell on his knees and blew a horn.
I stumbled onto my knees as well and got kicked in the head by a passing orc.
Everything went black.
To be continued
End of Book One.
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Post by nope on Sept 14, 2007 22:07:21 GMT -5
HASN'T ANYONE READ THIS YET?
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Post by Stal on Sept 14, 2007 22:20:35 GMT -5
Hey, Ringo, chill. It'd only been 47 minutes since you'd posted it. This is an internet forum, after all. Things aren't going to move that fast all the time. So just be patient and wait, eh?
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Post by Rikku on Sept 14, 2007 22:27:56 GMT -5
Part Seven! Yai!
XDDD *roffles* Ah, metacity ... Good job on this part, Ringo!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 14, 2007 22:28:52 GMT -5
AWESOME! *incinerates another orc* High five, Shrimpy!
Nice, Ringo! ^^
XD
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Post by nope on Sept 14, 2007 22:49:08 GMT -5
hee. Sorry Stal, I'm kinda... Strange like that.
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