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Post by Gav on Jul 30, 2005 21:02:30 GMT -5
*stabs Sirius with the SoA*
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Post by Rachel on Jul 30, 2005 22:10:13 GMT -5
It took me this long to realize you had updated XD I'm not going to bother saying write more.
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Post by Sirius on Aug 2, 2005 20:45:00 GMT -5
It'll happen when it happens.
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Post by Sirius on Aug 5, 2005 20:22:02 GMT -5
Good news: I'm writing it now.
Bad news: It's gunna be kinda short. And it will close the story.
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Post by Patrick (Forumerly Known As) on Aug 5, 2005 20:22:29 GMT -5
Good news: I'm writing it now. Bad news: It's gunna be kinda short. And it will close the story. *excited*
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Post by Sirius on Aug 5, 2005 20:25:43 GMT -5
Epilogue Sirius waited nervously in the chair as the hours past, the surgeons coming out with no news at all. Every time a door opened, he wheeled his head around towards the door where Guy’s surgery was underway. Each time he would turn away disappointed. What if he died? Who else in the NTWF was left? It was seven hours before the doctor came out of the room. When Sirius saw his face, he got up slowly. “What happened?” The doctor shook his head slowly. That’s all Sirius needed to know. He was the only one left. All the NTWFers were either dead or in jail. Every single one of them. “When can the body be released?” “A few days at the most,” the doctor said solemnly. “Thanks…” Sirius said, turning away and running out of the room. *** The sun beat down on the back of Sirius’ neck as he stared down at the white tombstone. Guy was deeply engraved on the top and below were the dates 1991-2005. Sirius placed a lone flower near it and looked at it remorsefully. There was no one else there to mourn. No one there to comfort him. Guy was dead and Sirius was alive. It was unfair. Why couldn’t he have been killed? Why Guy? After he actually had a chance…he died. Sirius shook his head, tears forming in his eyes. With that, he turned his back to the grave and walked off into the rising sun -- alone. The End
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Post by Patrick (Forumerly Known As) on Aug 5, 2005 20:27:03 GMT -5
*tears well up and applause forms* That was great, Sirius!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2005 20:32:23 GMT -5
I seriously think I might cry. That was truly touching, Sirius.
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Post by Sirius on Aug 5, 2005 20:35:15 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I've fufilled my purpose.
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Post by Patrick (Forumerly Known As) on Aug 5, 2005 20:38:51 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I've fufilled my purpose. ... to make us weep?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2005 20:42:24 GMT -5
*cries* It's so sad... you truely are a master author Sirius, it was great. The ending was worth the wait.
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Post by Sirius on Aug 5, 2005 20:51:01 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I've fufilled my purpose. ... to make us weep? (now your personal text doesn't make much sense ) ...Yeah. And thanks, Apollo.
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Post by Rachel on Aug 5, 2005 21:06:33 GMT -5
*cry* That is the perfect ending, and it is so sad.
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Post by Sirius on Aug 5, 2005 21:18:30 GMT -5
Tankles. Can't wait to see what Guy says. XD Lucky guy...having the most emotional death of the story.
And me prolly gunna write another story soon. And I'll do the same thing. Post like mad in the beginning...then slower...and slower...to build up suspense. XD But it won't have any connections to this 'cuz I'd have no charcters.
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Post by Rachel on Aug 5, 2005 21:26:13 GMT -5
Tankles. Can't wait to see what Guy says. XD Lucky guy...having the most emotional death of the story. And me prolly gunna write another story soon. And I'll do the same thing. Post like mad in the beginning...then slower...and slower...to build up suspense. XD But it won't have any connections to this 'cuz I'd have no charcters. S P O I L E R Guy is like the equvalent of Dumbledore XD White tomb and all E N D
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