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Post by tennisblondie16 on Sept 11, 2004 10:37:12 GMT -5
Reviews for my short story "A Back-Stabbing Competition: Story of Kyishi" would be great, but please don't mention grammar mistakes since I already know they're there And I'll try and start reviewing the things people are requesting. And just so you know, I made this story a very long time ago, so it's probably not that good.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 10:42:41 GMT -5
A Sister’s Embraceby erileenThis was an excellent story! It was very interesting, and you used very descriptive words, Eri! I enjoyed reading it a lot, and I didn't spot any typos. Excellent job! ;D Thank you very, very much Char! I'm so glad you liked it. Any other reviews for, "A Sister's Embrace" are mucho grande appreciated.
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Post by Sirius on Sept 11, 2004 10:43:12 GMT -5
Reviews for The Seris Story: Losing Everything are mandatory appreciated. Reviews coming up later.
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 11, 2004 10:54:58 GMT -5
DURNIT!!!!!!! I CREATED THE ACCOUNT IATEMYSOCKS, AND FORGOT TO CREATE THE PET! [whacks himself and dies]
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Post by william on Sept 11, 2004 10:56:28 GMT -5
DURNIT!!!!!!! I CREATED THE ACCOUNT IATEMYSOCKS, AND FORGOT TO CREATE THE PET! [whacks himself and dies] Blub, did you know that someone recently created a pet named after you?
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 11, 2004 10:59:40 GMT -5
Blub, did you know that someone recently created a pet named after you? Yep. I literally jumped when I saw that. It's either a freakish coincidence or that person really likes me! I found out when I was searching my username to see if I was unfrozen. I found out that I was unfrozen, and that someone had a pet with my name!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 11:00:20 GMT -5
Yep. I literally jumped when I saw that. It's either a freakish coincidence or that person really likes me! I found out when I was searching my username to see if I was unfrozen. I found out that I was unfrozen, and that someone had a pet with my name! Wait...dude, when did you get frozen? o0
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 11, 2004 11:02:40 GMT -5
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Post by stoneman3x on Sept 11, 2004 11:05:02 GMT -5
DURNIT!!!!!!! I CREATED THE ACCOUNT IATEMYSOCKS, AND FORGOT TO CREATE THE PET! [whacks himself and dies] LOL! That's pretty funny, Blub. I didn't know you were the one who had created that account-- too bad someone else grabbed the name for their Pteri. Anyway... we're getting off topic... so back to reviewing...
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 11, 2004 11:08:15 GMT -5
LOL! That's pretty funny, Blub. I didn't know you were the one who had created that account-- too bad someone else grabbed the name for their Pteri. Anyway... we're getting off topic... so back to reviewing... [points at Stone] I'll get you for this!!! Wait, that didn't make sense at all.... Anywho, if you'd like something reviewed, just give me a shout-out and it'll be here in no time!
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Post by tennisblondie16 on Sept 11, 2004 11:10:42 GMT -5
Reviews for The Seris Story: Losing Everything are mandatory appreciated. Reviews coming up later. Lol, I'll be sure to review yours as soon as I get the chance!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 11:10:50 GMT -5
Wow...I was on vacation during all of this. o0
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Post by aakfish on Sept 11, 2004 11:12:14 GMT -5
Anywho, if you'd like something reviewed, just give me a shout-out and it'll be here in no time! Blub could you please review my article 'So you want to be a Petpetsitter'. Thanks. Also I hope you dont mind if I wait till OLFW has finished before I review it.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 11:15:12 GMT -5
Anywho, if you'd like something reviewed, just give me a shout-out and it'll be here in no time! Blub, if you could review my short story, "A Sister's Embrace", I'd be very much appreciative.
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 11, 2004 11:16:52 GMT -5
Wow...I was on vacation during all of this. o0 Hehe, well now you know. And reviews for Eri's story and Aak's article are coming right up!
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