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Post by calvinseviltwin on Mar 20, 2003 12:55:41 GMT -5
This is very off topic, but it also involes writing. www.shoelesswander.net/bio.htmlCan someone briefly go over spelling for my bio on my website? 'Twould be most helpful. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2003 13:26:53 GMT -5
This is very off topic, but it also involes writing. www.shoelesswander.net/bio.htmlCan someone briefly go over spelling for my bio on my website? 'Twould be most helpful. Hm... the only things I saw wrong was you wrote surgery, "sugery" and on the contact part, you spelled pretend wrong, I forget how, it was something like pretenint.  Nager Syndrome sounds exactly like Round Syndrome... Are they the same thing? I know round syndrome is when you born with a very circular head, flat face and don't get scared much of things such as crowds. Nothing against anyone with it,, though... About two weeks ago at church, a little girl (around the age of three) with round syndrome just ran away from her mom and on to the front stage and started singing the song that the rest of the church was and dancing. Then she ran away from the pastor. |
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Post by starhamster on Mar 20, 2003 13:38:20 GMT -5
The only mistake is what Cheshire already pointed out - sugery should be surgery. (And the fact that "Shoeless" is misspelled in the title bar.) Other than that, it's fine!
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Mar 20, 2003 14:44:05 GMT -5
Hm... the only things I saw wrong was you wrote surgery, "sugery" and on the contact part, you spelled pretend wrong, I forget how, it was something like pretenint. Nager Syndrome sounds exactly like Round Syndrome... Are they the same thing? I know round syndrome is when you born with a very circular head, flat face and don't get scared much of things such as crowds. Nothing against anyone with it,, though... About two weeks ago at church, a little girl (around the age of three) with round syndrome just ran away from her mom and on to the front stage and started singing the song that the rest of the church was and dancing. Then she ran away from the pastor. No, nager's not the same as Rounds. They have similar symptoms, but it's not the same thing. The "Shoeless" thing is intentional. ^^ |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2003 14:59:34 GMT -5
Ah, just wondering... I actually, come to think of it, I've heard my dad mention nager syndrome once... Anyways, your really funny and nice, so no one here seems to care how you look...
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Mar 20, 2003 15:00:37 GMT -5
Ah, just wondering... I actually, come to think of it, I've heard my dad mention nager syndrome once... Anyways, your really funny and nice, so no one here seems to care how you look... Heeh. Alas, the wonderful world of middle school. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2003 15:06:08 GMT -5
Heeh. Alas, the wonderful world of middle school.  Hey, Middle School can be tough... I don't really get bugged, but there's tons of people I see who get heck non-stop every day, all day. I don't see how they survive. Hey, just because I find everything easy in Middle School because I'm not a target, doesn't make Middle School easy for everyone else. |
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Post by poy222 on Mar 20, 2003 18:38:51 GMT -5
Hey, Middle School can be tough... I don't really get bugged, but there's tons of people I see who get heck non-stop every day, all day. I don't see how they survive. Hey, just because I find everything easy in Middle School because I'm not a target, doesn't make Middle School easy for everyone else. You're right... I'm in middle school, (seventh grade) and I am sometimes a target. I've had people call me "ugly" or say I'm fat, even if they don't notice they're doing so. Heck, I was recently called , and the idiot next to me calls me a "homogenius" and finds it funny because of the word 'homo' in it. He doesn't even know what it is! But most people like me for who I am and find me funny. People take advantage of me though, and today, a guy in a higher grade told me to get up so he could sit in my place... and I did change place before I knew what I was doing. Okay I'm rambling now  |
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Post by lupe on Mar 20, 2003 18:43:42 GMT -5
Aw... **makes Megz feel loved** I'm not very good at spelling, so I just read everything. 'Twas very sad...
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Post by oddhatter on Mar 20, 2003 19:48:05 GMT -5
School kids can be cruel.
You misspelled "genetic", "disease" and "causes" in your fifth sentence.
*hugs*
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Post by mushroom on Mar 20, 2003 23:01:13 GMT -5
*blinks* I'm sorry, Megz.... I don't get picked on much. When I do things like get mad at people for repeatedly turning on and off a computer without properly shutting down, or refusing to deviate from the assigned seating, I get teased, but generally I'm fine. And when I do--well, I care, but I'll survive. So...well, you can always become a writer and work from home if people are that cruel. *pokes self* Sorry. I don't really know how to advise other people on social interaction...I never mastered it myself  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2003 23:14:51 GMT -5
*blinks* I'm sorry, Megz.... I don't get picked on much. When I do things like get mad at people for repeatedly turning on and off a computer without properly shutting down, or refusing to deviate from the assigned seating, I get teased, but generally I'm fine. And when I do--well, I care, but I'll survive. So...well, you can always become a writer and work from home if people are that cruel. *pokes self* Sorry. I don't really know how to advise other people on social interaction...I never mastered it myself (appears and starts listing girls that are rumoured and some admitted and gave love notes to him and candy grams on valentines day) ...Sam ...Danika Baxter...Raya Greig...Bethany Brisson...Marta Trann... Jessica Nguyen... Carol-Anne ... Sarah Roberts...Stephanie Anderson...Rebecca McKenzie... There's more, I'm just going to try and not thinking of them or else I'll write them down... Sorry. I'm WAY to full of myself. I may look half decent and get a Palm Springs/Tofino/White Rock/Mexico/San Diego tan, but my personality is like crap. That's why if any of those above people got to know me, they'd hate me. The only ones I know well are Raya, Bethany, Danika and Stephanie... The only one I really like is Danika. But I rejected my first offer for a dance for her at the Valentines Day Sock-Hop... Never do something like that, I thought it was Sam that was going to ask me... But rejectin Danika was just plain wrong. I'm good friends with her. Of coarse I found out from Bethany that Danika said that I BROUGHT HER to the dance... Now I don't trust her completely. We haven't been talking much since. Okay, so maybe I throw popcorn back and forth with Sam... Ooh, I just found my next crush. |
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Post by Bluey on Mar 21, 2003 13:58:18 GMT -5
The only thing wrong with the bio I saw was the fact that syndrome was spelled wrong.
Middle school sucks. High school sucks. Heck, the whole education ladder is a pain. I can't wait until I finally get my degree in business and writing and whatever else and assume my dream of owning a corporation.
Tomorrow, DragonCorp...next week, THE WORLD!!
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Post by Smiley on Mar 21, 2003 14:11:32 GMT -5
Middle school SUCKS. I hate it. Everyone makes fun of everyone when they did nothing wrong and are just being themselves. If you wear anything slightly out of the ordinary, somebody "better" than you can just say "What the hell you wearin'?" and get her hips into it and everything. God, I hate it. It's only half-way survivable if you're going out with one of the top ten guys in the school, meaning that it is only half-way survivable for ten girls. The teachers always expect too much of you in class, and then they give you boatloads of homework as if you have no life at home. And then you have stupid teachers who give you lunch detention for looking at them or asking a question... *mutters something under her breath that sounds a lot like "%@#$ you Mr. Cudney..."* So...yeah. People always make fun of me. One girl at school called me "Cottage Cheese Legs" in P.E. because I don't have anything close to a tan. I swear, I look like Snow White. And then people call me fat too, because I am few pounds overweight. One of my friends actually attempted sucide--three times, that is--because people wouldn't stop talking about her. Kids are so cruel...  Sometimes I wish I could just sock them, but no, I'll get in trouble. You have to "tell the teacher" whenever kids are mean to you. Then they say "Can't you treat this like an adult?"(and kids make fun of you even more for actually telling the teacher). But adults usually treat those situations the same way...cuss, and maybe even hit if necessary. The whole system is just make sea monkeysed up. (pardon my French) |
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Post by lupe on Mar 23, 2003 19:42:13 GMT -5
School kids can be cruel. Yeah. I get treated like a pile of dung at school... And if I'm really lucky, I get tape in my hair and a sign on my back that says: "Gay" . No, litterly, that happens to me... **sheds a tear** |
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Nager Syndrome sounds exactly like Round Syndrome... Are they the same thing? I know round syndrome is when you born with a very circular head, flat face and don't get scared much of things such as crowds. Nothing against anyone with it,, though... About two weeks ago at church, a little girl (around the age of three) with round syndrome just ran away from her mom and on to the front stage and started singing the song that the rest of the church was and dancing. Then she ran away from the pastor.
Hey, Middle School can be tough... I don't really get bugged, but there's tons of people I see who get heck non-stop every day, all day. I don't see how they survive. Hey, just because I find everything easy in Middle School because I'm not a target, doesn't make Middle School easy for everyone else.
Sometimes I wish I could just sock them, but no, I'll get in trouble. You have to "tell the teacher" whenever kids are mean to you. Then they say "Can't you treat this like an adult?"(and kids make fun of you even more for actually telling the teacher). But adults usually treat those situations the same way...cuss, and maybe even hit if necessary.