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Origins – NTWF short comic (Completed)
« Thread Started on Mar 25, 2007, 7:16am »

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Um, right, so before I begin, I should probably have an introduction.

This is an 11 page comic all in all and is my entry for the Origins Challenge. It’s a bit... short, really, kind of like a one-off short story spin. It’s also not really for the very young or sensitive, because it contains a little hitting people around (no blood), a touch of revealing clothing on girls, and Rider. It has Rider. That kind of speaks for itself.

And it's finished now. :3 I feel very happy.

Uh, the art is pretty good though.

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Here we go!

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;__; you guys are so mean. I came out in the nude for the first(?) time, and nobody says a word of encouragement!

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Re: Origins (Crystal) – Old Times
« Reply #1 on Mar 25, 2007, 7:16am »

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 2)
« Reply #2 on Mar 25, 2007, 7:50am »

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Ooh, nice, Crystal. ^_____^ I love your art, and this seems like it will be very interesting... I'll be looking forward to it. ^_^

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 2)
« Reply #3 on Mar 26, 2007, 4:39am »

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Yay, Crystal-art! *grabs a beanbag* ^^

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 2)
« Reply #4 on Mar 27, 2007, 12:25am »

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Now wait a second...I don't remember it working like that...that was long before the "Torture Stal" phase started. *scratches head* <.<;;

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 2)
« Reply #5 on Mar 27, 2007, 2:25am »

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T__T Artistic license! I claim artistic license!

Although Kiddo wanted to torture SOMEONE when she contacted me over AIM, I remember that much... >>

Quite a bit of the comic won't follow the timeline, though XDDDD You joined the ninjas pretty early on, didn't you?

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 2)
« Reply #6 on Mar 27, 2007, 9:06am »

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Although Kiddo wanted to torture SOMEONE when she contacted me over AIM, I remember that much... >>

Quite a bit of the comic won't follow the timeline, though XDDDD You joined the ninjas pretty early on, didn't you?

XD Yes. Somewhere in the first couple days, just about.

I was talking with Kiddo or something and asked her what was going on with the ninja thing. "Crystal and I decided to become ninjas. You want to be one, too?"

And then just after I'd joined, that's when the pirates got mobilized. "OMGz, there's ninja everywhere! We better form up and start fighting them! D: "

The rest is history...

XD And artistic license is fine. I was just confusled.

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
« Reply #7 on Mar 28, 2007, 1:19am »

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Third page!

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I think of all the comic, I like the one after this the best. :3

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
« Reply #8 on Mar 30, 2007, 8:37pm »

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The suspense!

Coming up in the next chapter:

"The mother"!

Dun dun dun..

*is being cheesy*

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
« Reply #9 on Mar 30, 2007, 9:00pm »

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
« Reply #10 on Mar 31, 2007, 2:33am »

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My favorite page XDDDDDD

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
« Reply #11 on Mar 31, 2007, 12:52pm »

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Love Kiddo's expression! Rock on, Crystal!

The pirate ship is so smiley and happy and yay! XD

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
« Reply #12 on Mar 31, 2007, 1:26pm »

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Besides Crystal, I think I absolutely love Kiddo in this comic. XDDD

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Re: Origins (comic) – Old Times (Part 3)
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Re: Origins (comic) ?Old Times (Part 3)
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